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The Shadow.

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Noiselessly, the shadow skulked along the alley wall behind the ignorant victim, who whistled happily beneath the fluorescent glow of street lamps.

Suddenly, the shadow deserted the darkness, wielding a silver blade. No scream, only blood came from open lips as the victim's wallet was plundered before the shadow disappeared...
So, here it is: a brief but harrowing short story of only fifty words. I wanted to challenge myself with a word limit. Hope y'all enjoy it! Thanks xx
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Chezzy-Am's avatar
This was so amazing! Seriously, within fifty words you've:

  • established a protagonist and antagonist
  • established a motive, a plot, and themed it accordingly
  • used symbols in this prose which carry the concept of the shadow
and finally
  • Creates a story in itself.

Well done. Honestly. I'm impressed :)